Pariah oF Never

Hello! I'm not very good with these critiques. But, I really loved this! I wish there was a way to hear the songs with music or with someone singing it. ...

Thank you, Dreamy. I'll put in the corrections you suggested and any other needed punctuations. :)

Thank You, Lily. That means a lot! I will definetly keep writing :lol: Also your avatar is very nce :)

Hello! Please read and give any criticisms you see or can think off. Of course, if you see anything I did well also comment on that :D. I would like ...

Hello! I though this was such a happy poem. For the record it may not have made me laugh out loud, but it did make me smile :D Not much ...

Hi The critic before me already talked about grammar problems (which is good because I'm not very good at correcting grammar). However, I do agree with him or her in ...

Wow. That was really great. It had such an apathetic (creepy) tone but it carried soooo much emotion. Seriously I loved it. It gave me chills. I'm trying to wrap ...

Once again, my words flow out on paper. As if they were the lifeblood of my soul, bleeding upon the paper that awaits the blessing Beneath the weakness of flesh, ...

Wow. This is very intriguing. I like how the prologue is told from an unusual point of view. I'm not exactly sure who (or what) is telling this story. This ...

I really liked this. Your prologue did its job perfectly. It gave me a nice taste of the story and it was great. Can't wait for the rest of the ...